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Svenja II by Hart-Worx Svenja II by Hart-Worx
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Photo & Retouch: Hartmut Nörenberg
Model: Svenja

© Hartmut Nörenberg || Hart-Worx
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:iconkcorbett:
Great colors and composition. I love the photo.

Remember, the following comments are only suggestions from what "I" would do. Always stick with your own style. (smile) The only personal suggestion I have is wanting to see more texture on her right cheek to match the left, and adjusting the size of her right eye a bit. I'd also dodge her upper lip a bit to make it fuller and I would have used warp or liquify to make it better match lower lip.

These are only suggestions that I'd have tried, but wouldn't know if they make the picture better or worse until after trying: I'd have burned the very edge of her irises, edges of face and edges of nose - and bring down the highlight on her nose a bit.

Love the features of her face. Not sure if that was post or her natural features.
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this is an amazing photo and i think you did a wonderful job! That hair is Crazy Awesome!! I love red hair. in any shot. it just ads ...pizazz lol Theres something about the look on the models face though. but im sure what it is I think her expression could have been a little softer maybe but the intensity in her eyes are amazing. She is a beautiful model i love the colors and the innocence of the whole shot. Great work to everyone involved! the simplicity is perfect for this shot. i dont think it could have been done any more perfectly
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DonDeloro Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Sie haben ein sensibles Auge für die Schönheit einer Frau und verstehen es obendrein dies auch für andere Menschen sichtbar zu machen, mit Hilfe einer 'Fotokiste'. Sie haben meine Bewunderung dafür.
Schade das auf Ihrer Website immer nur die ersten 5 Bilder laufen.
Mein Kommentar zu diesem Bild - Sweet red Devil - wenn sie dich einmal gefangen nimmt Kommt man(n) icht mehr los.
Ps.: Auf Facebook würde ich persönlich niemals irgend Jemanden folgen -Ich blocke die Seite- schon wegen ihrer Geschäftsbedingungen.

Ich wünsche Ihnen weiterhin viel Erfolg.

Don
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Hart-Worx Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Professional Photographer
Hi Don,

you can browse trough all the galleries of my website. ;)
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DonDeloro Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Du, ich bin aus Deutschland ! Ich dachte weil man deine Seite auch auf deutsch umstellen kann, das du auch von hier bist. Schießt du die Foto's alle Selbst ? Es sind wunderschöne dabei .

und vorsichtshalber noch in enlisch...

You know, I'm from Germany! I thought because you can change your site also in German, that you're from here. Shoot you the photo's all self? They are beautiful there.

Grüße Don
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Hart-Worx Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Professional Photographer
ich ich schieße alle fotos selbst.
danke ;)
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DonDeloro Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Ich denke das sind solche Augenblicke in denen man geneigt ist andere zu beneiden, ich selber könnte sowas vielleicht garnicht. Aber beneiden würde ich höchstens den Augenblick
doch darf man wohl nicht die Arbeit hinter diesem Moment übersehen. Mein dank an Dich für das Festhalten solcher "Erinnerungen" und das du diese mit uns teilst.
Ich wohl kein Bild erwerben können aber vorbeischauen werde ich von Zeit zu Zeit mal ...

Grüße Don
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jaymouh Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
WOW!
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BelPetr Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Very cool! This portrait is beautiful.
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Nszerdy Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
This is one of the best photos I've EVER seen! Mesmerizing--this needs no critique--insane!
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ramzay78 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
so beautiful
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Caleb9849 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
Beautiful as well :)
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