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Submitted: July 15, 2012
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Svenja IIby ~Hart-Worx

Photography / People & Portraits / Emotive Portraits

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Photo & Retouch: Hartmut Nörenberg
Model: Svenja

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Critique by =Torremitsu Jul 16, 2012, 7:36:32 PM

Just a slight critique on the actual shot. The bokeh on her bangs is a bit distracting. I see that you're using an amazing lens but I think backing off on the aperture a bit would have been even more pleasing. I love the dreamy effect too and it's obvious that you were using your equipment to the best of it's abilities.

The retouch on the other hand!! HOLY CRAP WOW!!. I don't think I could do anything so perfect. what was doe to the eyes is completely mesmerizing. Completely visible texture on the skin, the use of contouring and dodge and burn were excellent. Maybe one day I can hope to do something this awesome.

I give the image as a whole an A. Well done sir! Great portfolio btw

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Critique by ~HaXBoX57 Jul 16, 2012, 6:36:06 AM

Basically, the whole face and the hairstyle, and the killer look that this model has, its just a massive impact.

I love her eye colour that goes synergy with the hairstyle, giving it the "amber" style, also love how minimally make up has been used to take this photo .
Also to not forget is the confidence of this model what is the must have for a great photo impact, her expression is like "I am the fire, don't play silly on me" or, "I am a wild woman, If this is too much for you, go play with your kittens" Love how her look give her superiority. Very beautiful model.

Image quality is just decent, as usuall pro photographers avoid noise, blurs, shakings etc.
Very nice lighting bleaching her face, and I would agree to put a simple colour of a background because its really don't needed.

Overal the energy emmiting from the model is just wonderful, full of confidence and energy that symbolizes the zodiac Leo.
Great job both of you guys.