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Photo & Retouch: Hartmut Nörenberg
Model: Svenja

© Hartmut Nörenberg || Hart-Worx
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:iconkcorbett:
Great colors and composition. I love the photo.

Remember, the following comments are only suggestions from what "I" would do. Always stick with your own style. (smile) The only personal suggestion I have is wanting to see more texture on her right cheek to match the left, and adjusting the size of her right eye a bit. I'd also dodge her upper lip a bit to make it fuller and I would have used warp or liquify to make it better match lower lip.

These are only suggestions that I'd have tried, but wouldn't know if they make the picture better or worse until after trying: I'd have burned the very edge of her irises, edges of face and edges of nose - and bring down the highlight on her nose a bit.

Love the features of her face. Not sure if that was post or her natural features.
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this is an amazing photo and i think you did a wonderful job! That hair is Crazy Awesome!! I love red hair. in any shot. it just ads ...pizazz lol Theres something about the look on the models face though. but im sure what it is I think her expression could have been a little softer maybe but the intensity in her eyes are amazing. She is a beautiful model i love the colors and the innocence of the whole shot. Great work to everyone involved! the simplicity is perfect for this shot. i dont think it could have been done any more perfectly
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DonDeloro Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Sie haben ein sensibles Auge für die Schönheit einer Frau und verstehen es obendrein dies auch für andere Menschen sichtbar zu machen, mit Hilfe einer 'Fotokiste'. Sie haben meine Bewunderung dafür.
Schade das auf Ihrer Website immer nur die ersten 5 Bilder laufen.
Mein Kommentar zu diesem Bild - Sweet red Devil - wenn sie dich einmal gefangen nimmt Kommt man(n) icht mehr los.
Ps.: Auf Facebook würde ich persönlich niemals irgend Jemanden folgen -Ich blocke die Seite- schon wegen ihrer Geschäftsbedingungen.

Ich wünsche Ihnen weiterhin viel Erfolg.

Don
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:iconhart-worx:
Hart-Worx Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Professional Photographer
Hi Don,

you can browse trough all the galleries of my website. ;)
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DonDeloro Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Du, ich bin aus Deutschland ! Ich dachte weil man deine Seite auch auf deutsch umstellen kann, das du auch von hier bist. Schießt du die Foto's alle Selbst ? Es sind wunderschöne dabei .

und vorsichtshalber noch in enlisch...

You know, I'm from Germany! I thought because you can change your site also in German, that you're from here. Shoot you the photo's all self? They are beautiful there.

Grüße Don
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Hart-Worx Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Professional Photographer
ich ich schieße alle fotos selbst.
danke ;)
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DonDeloro Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Ich denke das sind solche Augenblicke in denen man geneigt ist andere zu beneiden, ich selber könnte sowas vielleicht garnicht. Aber beneiden würde ich höchstens den Augenblick
doch darf man wohl nicht die Arbeit hinter diesem Moment übersehen. Mein dank an Dich für das Festhalten solcher "Erinnerungen" und das du diese mit uns teilst.
Ich wohl kein Bild erwerben können aber vorbeischauen werde ich von Zeit zu Zeit mal ...

Grüße Don
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jaymouh Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
WOW!
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BelPetr Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Very cool! This portrait is beautiful.
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:iconnszerdy:
Nszerdy Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
This is one of the best photos I've EVER seen! Mesmerizing--this needs no critique--insane!
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ramzay78 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
so beautiful
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Caleb9849 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
Beautiful as well :)
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:iconadrianfarenheittepes:
Love her! :love:
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:iconjohnfboslet2001:
johnfboslet2001 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Intense
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boke78 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
Just: "loving it" ...
nice one Hartmut!
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:iconsoundsk:
soundsk Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
Awesome portrait... Hope to some day I can shoot at that level... Might take a while lol!
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:iconmr-bastos:
Mr-Bastos Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Feature here: [link]
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:iconbojkovski:
Bojkovski Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful portrait
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:iconlouiemartinez:
LouieMartinez Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Professional Photographer
Beautiful!
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:iconhollowofnight:
HollowOfNight Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
Amazing Shot!! She Is Gorgeous!!
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:iconmarcelodzn:
MarceloDZN Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
so expressive
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SAMIGUY101 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Professional Photographer
LOVELY IMAGE!!!
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:iconfortunekiller:
fortunekiller Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
Amazing photograph and stunning model. I can't stop staring!
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Sol-The-Beast Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
Rarely have I seen a more stunning image.
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Mitia-Arcturus Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
There is an Hight youngness expression and intensity in eyes...:heart:...!!!
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DkmApfel Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
Oh My God, shocking. She kinda reminds me of a Minimoy from Arthur and the Minimoys.
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MichaelBittick Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012   General Artist
would love to use this in a pic
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Jasmine-Jean Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012   General Artist
Yup, BRAVE!
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:iconzollzwerg:
ZollZwerg Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
Really nice one! I like the depth and how her body just blurs out.
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:iconmartiuk:
martiuk Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Professional Photographer
Quite magnificent.
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higherchi Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
I was so drawn to this beauty, human, but un-earthly. The viberant red hair drew me in, her eyes kept me there, trapped.
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aktell Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Such a Great Shot !!!

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tabihenson Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student General Artist
She looks like a small child, but her smoldering eyes make her seem older...this is beautiful.
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malaugusto Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012   Photographer
This lovely work has been featured here: People and Portraits Spotlight Vol. 17.
Looking forward to seeing more art from you at #devPREMIUM!

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:iconida-astero:
Ida-Astero Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
What a beautiful model. She looks like forest elf! I love this picture
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caleb-case Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Excellent work on the lighting.
The photo itself has a very... painted quality to it. :thumbsup:
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Torremitsu Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Professional Photographer
OMG! MY EYES LOVE YOU!!
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1xNEKO Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing. She looks almost like a porcelain doll.
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Rourke-1 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Professional Photographer
B E A U T I F U L ! ! !
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:iconnurdt:
NURDT Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Awesome focusssss! love the soft, fragile impression, beautiful girl.
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KibaPandaRo Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my god<3 what is this sweet little beauty?:D the hair is so god damn awesome, and those eyes<3 oh and in my eyes she resembles a hobbit:)) or a nature fairy, or maybe even a leprichaun, still very extraordinary beautiful<3
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Dezeer Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful!
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SpectralShimmer Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great emphasis created by the focus. Beautiful colors and an excellent choice of background color; It brings out her eyes nicely and doesn't detract from her face and beautiful hair. In fact it helps add emphasis to the red hair which in turn helps draw the eye to her face and eyes even more: Great balance. Very dramatic overall feel created by the lighting - just right on the contrast. Also, very beautiful model.
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Invaderzimluv4real Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Wow this is amazing
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Sei-Slash Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
*0* She's adorable. Her cheeks.
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MohammedAlSaggaf Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
wooooooooooow Terrific shot man
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:iconhe-de:
He-de Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student General Artist
she reminds me a little of Chucky... kinda scary xD
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PyroSikTh Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Her face is scary :(
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mrmd53 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Terrific Portrait!:clap:
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:iconmatoki:
Matoki Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
She looks like Merida from Brave to me xD
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CallMeIK Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was going to say the same ^^
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Synari Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She looks like a pixie or a fae of sorts. Angelic. Very nice work!
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