Crit: The overall photo has a bit to much 'yellow' in the whole for me. But that is just my own personal crit <3 Comment: Other then that, the lighting on the model is beautiful and her pose is very easy and relaxed which I think just makes her look even more beautiful. Great job
I think your wright (said the new guy to the professional ) now that i'm thinking of it if you would've put her in the middle (especially such a beautiful model) there would be absolutely no attention for the background. thank you for explaining it.