Overall I really like this piece. It captures the classic romance. The lighting is excellent, as are the models, depth of focus, etc... What makes it really work is that it captures that space in time between "the big kiss." A few things that don't work for me (imho) are the washed out lighting (no contrast) between the white shirts and the white light of the sky. One could argue that it gives it a heavenly glow; and it does. But it's hard for my eyes to adjust to that. Especially the negative space inbetween them. I feel the same way about them wearing the same clothing colors (both white shirts with blue jeans). With that being said, other than those two points, I really like this picture and could easily see anyone enjoying its timeless quality. Well done.